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MysticalAngel Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23 |
Decieving Love Careless and blind True to my heart My emotions unwind Mystical mysteries His being and beyond His life and his stories Nothing can go wrong With a curious feeling Is there something here? Am I the love of your life? Do you really care? All the answers Hidden away Locked behind your eyes Released simply by day You have the qualities From heaven above Something draws me To your lasting love For your feelings To be honest and true I feel that one day I could fall in love with you! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
if this was for me i could not wait for you love wonderfully said. good job and i hope you share it with the one you care. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a BEAUTIFUL poem...whoever this person is should be very lucky that there is someone like you out there wanting them...honestly i think whoever you wrote this for should get it... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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MysticalAngel Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23 |
Thanks guys... Sorry though... that relationship didn't work out. He decided that my love for him wasn't good enough for just him. He wanted more than on girl and Me being the old fashioned type don't like to share my men! Damn those cheating guys! lol! More poetry on the way! Thanks again... Carissa |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a beautiful poem. I'm sorry things didn't work out, I know how that feels. I wish you best of luck in the future!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Awesome poem. I love it. Keep writing! Love ya, Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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