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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-06-23 12:39 PM


~Chapter 2~

You have a beautiful smile,
with a dimple in you cheek.
When you were around,
I never thought i could feel so weak.

After we hooked up you always said I love you,
and I thought it was true.
But it happened again,
my heart broke in two.

I never actually thought,
that we would last.
So thats why Im looking to the future,
and forgetting the past.


~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-23 01:49 AM


great work again but i'm still reading.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-06-23 03:30 AM


thanks again...keep going i hope you like the last one...its my favorite...it took me the longest to write...enjoy...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-06-23 04:26 AM


Erin~ beautiful writing! Seems things are sort of looking up for you... Hope so anyways! Just remember this one thing: " no guys is worth your tears, and the one who is --won't make you cry." Keep your faith, love always finds a way! And with time, that heart of yours will heal also! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

4 posted 2000-06-23 08:19 AM


I'm soo sorry you got hurt. Time for chapter 3

Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-18 01:53 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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