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Teen Poetry #3

Alright In The End

mr0001
Junior Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 39

0 posted 2000-06-12 02:11 AM

I wake up terrified,
Alone, and scared.
Then, i turn over,
And you are there.
You reach over,
Take my hand and
Tell me it will be ok.
I believe you because
I have no reason not to,
You are always here
When i wake up and you
Always tell me we will be
Alright in the end.

So i fall back asleep
In the comfort of your arms.
And i know that i am
Safe here with you.
And i'm not scared anymore,
Because you are holding me
And i know it will be ok.
I know this because
This is all i've ever known;
You have always been here
When i wake up and
Always, i know we will be
Alright in the end.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

1 posted 2000-06-12 03:09 PM

Hi mr0001
A nice read showing faith in someone you love

Sincerely
A_L

mickel2995
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 48

2 posted 2000-06-12 06:03 PM

I like the titkle, it fits great with the poem, good job.

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2000-06-12 07:22 PM

It must be wonderful to have someone to hold you and love you like this. Good poem.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2000-06-12 10:00 PM

I really like this one. It must really be an amazing feeling having someone who loves you so much and will always make sure you're alright in the end. It was a great poem

.

~Susie

"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-17 01:57 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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