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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Might: To all the accepted inviduals, To all the people with endowments, To all those with love, I say "It's too easy for you!" To all the extinct animals, To all the cut down trees, To all the murder victims, I say "You've been cheated!" To all the forgotten poets, To all the left out pieces of the puzzle, To all the reformist's of society, I say "Bravo!" And this is only the beginning of my tail. One that can go on forever and not fail, One that lasts and outlives all, One that would never think to stall. Take the bits and pieces of days, And combine them in confusing ways. In the end, you'll find to know That most of what you see is but a show. All of it is at first a lie. This clone world is made to defy. Live in the happy medium of light, And only then will you have true might.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
i'm convinced that not a single piece of bad writing will ever come out of you..this is yet another page in your beautiful collection of poetry..and i love it just like everything else. "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
you really really RoCK!!!!! where do you get your inspiration from?? your poems are like always so true... damn, just luv 'em!! luvz ya2, VS!! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wise words and message Javier ... I like your style, very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I have been wondering...How do you write such amazing work??? Keep it up buddy!!!  ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes well 2 of you asked where I get my inspiration and how i write such "amazing" work. I, personally, don't think it's all that great. About the inspiration, well i have no clue! I might see a leaf fall, and a little kid run by and i'll think "the falling leaf of youth crashes down all too often"....then i'll write a poem about it all. It just goes on how I perceive things in this world. How I view things. Usually by occurences. If I see it, I just find some analogy or huge metaphor to portray it all within the poem. I don't know, I guess it's hard to explain, but frankly my inspiration just comes from what I feel and see and the way I comvert it to the paper. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Once again, you rock my world. This poem reeks of truth... it's amazing! |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Heya Dopey, Perhaps the greatest curse of the artist, is we can’t appreciate our work…maybe this is what drives us to share it with so many others? I don’t really know, but I do know that I really enjoy your work. Keep it up… THERE IS NO SPOON! Spreading insanity, one post at a time Singing, "If i die before i wake..." |
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