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Teen Poetry #3

Reaching out for you...

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2000-09-15 08:16 PM

I try to reach out for you in the deep of the night
Yet I slip and fall into a twisting void
As I lie fast asleep in my bed
My soul begins to replay scenes
As if a movie theatre were in my head
I sit down and force myself to stay and watch
Though part of me is wanting to go
But I know deep down in my heart I know I have to stay
Hoping and praying that perhaps maybe one day
You would appear once more
And walk through my mind's door
And sit down next to me
And help rewrite an ending to this movie
But for now I'll just torture myself with dreaming..
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"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 09-15-2000).]

Lani_DarkOne
Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 152
UK

1 posted 2000-09-16 07:50 AM

Ceinwyn..this is such a moving poem, I can relate to every word..(and I love Crash and Burn

..keep posting..

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 2000-09-16 01:38 PM

Be'eth this not of me...or so?! Why can't you ever write somehting that sucks...well, that would kinda kill the point of writing then, wouldn't it?! You're such a talented writer in every sence...keep us posted....you special lil thang you.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

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