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Arrogant Reformer (4th Wave)
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Arrogant Reformer (4th Wave) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Well this is the beginning of the 4th Wave. Enjoy! Arrogant Reformer: Piles of crumbs lay on the floor, I guess I forgot the vacum I was meaning to buy. This is the reality that resides within every individuals mind. I seem to lack conformity according to the director of intellect. Candy cane wonderlands were always a false interpretation of drug abuse. Why bother with political issues if I'm a communist at a half ass rate? This is the reality that destroys the dreams of every toddler out there in this meaningless square earth. Keep your cable television and T.V. dinners, your "How to" books and information super highway. Let us be us! May the children of tomarrow know the meaning of respect. But for now, please pass the chicken.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
KICK ASS!!! this was way cool dopey!!!! luvz, VS!! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
LOL...That pass the chicken thing craked me up... And I can tell you like different... That's very different... And very good none-the-less... But what else would I expect from you?? hehe  _.~'"'~._HaVoK_.~'"'~._ It's better to burn-out Than fade away....... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LOL Dopey this was somewhat funny...But you pointed out something really good... May the children of tomarrow know the meaning of respect. Really good!!! p.s.~~~You spelled tomorrow wrong...Just wanted to point that out to you!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HOly God! Erin thanks for the spell check. I REALLY need people to correct my spelling and grammatical errors. That's like one of the major things. Anyway, the last line is "funny" sure...... but it all has meaning. Each line is deep in its own sense. I'm not going to explain each and every line but this poem is like the epitome of anti-society. I love the style of this poem, I actually like the poem itself. But, I can see why people say the last line "cracks them up"..... But its basically a end point. Like, the guy speaking in the poem is at this dinner table, right? OK! And he's telling all these people how much he despises this and that and bla bla bla... all those lines in the middle. So he says his conclusion, which was the line erin liked...."may the children of tomorrow lean the meaning of respect". And then he's like.....oh hell, you can't teach an old dog new tricks...forget it........just pass me the chicken....... ya know....so yea.. thats like the setting and the ending. But all that's in between is complex......ok so bye! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wooooo once again I've been captivated by what I have read. I loved it. Twisted. haha. see ya round javi man. ~carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Sup dopey, Ok, I know my activity is a little spastic at late, I just started a band, and it devours the majority of my time/remaining sanity. Nice work dude, it’s kinda…um…mosaic, in a way…good job! --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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