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Teen Poetry #3

The Gift

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-12 10:49 PM

The gift of passion
From the one you love
Is something to be cherished
It cannot be abused
Or treated poorly
For it is a once in a lifetime gift
And if you ruin it
You do not have another chance
For it is broken forever
Never to be mended
The broken pieces will stay with you forever
Never to be cleaned
They stay to remind you
And teach you a lesson
They stay in your heart
And in your mind
Never to be forgotten
Making you regret that moment
That decision
That destroyed that wonderful gift

*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*

UNC STAR
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

1 posted 2000-09-12 10:54 PM

That poem was really nice. I like the way you write.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-12 10:55 PM

I think you captured this very well, great job writing this one!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-13 11:36 AM

Love is one of the greatest gifts that we can give and recieve...And I think you proved it right here in this poem!!!Way to go!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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