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Teen Poetry #3

Love

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-12 10:48 PM

They always say love is forever
They always say lover never fades
But what if they are wrong
What if love isnt forever
And we just imagine it to be
What if love does fade
And we just dont relize it
Maybe love is nto real
Maybe it isnt what we feel
Maybe
just maybe
But how can we tell
there is no way to examin it
Study it
Put it under a microscope
So love is whatever we want
Love is what we feel
What we show
What we want
So, give your love
Feel your love
Desire mor love
For it is an infinite source
Fake or not
We all need it
No matter what

*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-13 11:33 AM

This poem reminds me sorta of a really good definition of the word love...Good job!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-13 01:44 PM

I think you do a great job of getting the reader to think about love with this poem, it's thought provoking. Wonderful writing!

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