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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Something exists within you A feeling that is strong And true You seem to reach out And show your true love Your true side And self You become more beautiful More human Your feelings become recognized And understood Because somehow You have changed More for the better All for the good *I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, I really like this one Ender, great writing! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I like this one... But the last 2 lines dont sound right... More for the better All for the good You should take out the word more...It just doesnt sound right!!!But its your poem so dont listen to me!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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