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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Jump to the Edge: Death is but an angel without wings. Now he has escaped from hell it seems. I'm just a blind man who sees his heart fade. I guess it was those demonds that bade Me to follow a path with no return To go to a place and lay to burn. I went to heavens door of hell. Guess they thought my minds a cell To my thoughts, feelings, and emotions shatter. Looked at God and asked his matter. Seems the world is dying slowly. Nothing that can't be changed holy. Peace is but a dream and dreams never come true, So just step to the edge and take a jump or two.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
when you'Re gonna jump, give me a call, cuz I'm comin with ya.... luv, Virgin Suïcide I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~If you were to ever jump just think of all the people that you would hurt by doing that...Just imagine how you would feel if someone that you were close to and cared about did that... ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Dopey- Don't jump. We'd all miss you, your poetry, your opinions. At least I would! That should be enough aye?  But really, don't do it okay? Good poem though. Hasta luego amigoBel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ok....just a reminder.....these poems are me as a 9th grader. more than 3yrs ago. So don't worry about me jumping, I'm still here aren't I? Good for some, bad for others, but damn good for me! haha...bye! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I agree with Virgin. I'd come with ya. But the only thing that stopped me from flyin' off my roof, was that I would probably go down instead of up. Love ya, Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
If you or someone you know is on the edge of suicide...please call... 1-800-WE-HELP-U |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
Dopey~ Another very good poem, yes, and one of those that kinda makes you think a lot about the person who wrote it.... I liked it, and I'm glad it was written 3 years ago and not recently.... Good job...Love, Kristi Lynn  "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know, sometimes poetry is symbolic more than real. Sort of that maybe you never would have seriously considered 'jumping'. It's just a work of art. It's always possible that you would jump.... or would have JUMPED, shall I say. But I do know what it's like to write something that may frighten people. But really all it is are your emotions magnified greatly. Good work! Jenn |
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