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HaVoK
Junior Member

since 2000-09-06

Posts 31
DETROIT, MI

0 posted 2000-09-12 09:24 PM

I have 5 older sisters...and no brothers...I'm the only boy...And youngest...I love ALL my sisters to death and without them I wouldn't be who I am...One of my sisters messed up when she was 19 and is now 24 with a 5 year old kid...Some guy she was with just jumped in her life thinking the kid is his...It's a long VERY complicated story...But in the end it equals... My sister broke up with her boyfriend for like 2 days..went on a rebound..fooled around with some guy..got back together with the ex- and a week later found out she was pregnant...The guy who she had a little "fling" with now wants to be sure that the kid isn't or is his (5 years later)...She's REALLY messed up emotionally... So this is for her..

"My sis"

I love you oh so much
And I will always be here
I will be your crutch
I will wipe your tear

I can't stand to see you sad
For it makes me sad too
And whenever you get mad
I start the day-a-new

Oh my sister can't you see
I have a shoulder for you
To lay your head happily
And always help you through

So take my hand into yours
And tell me what is wrong
We can run along the shores
As we play your favorite song

But for now my sis, my sis, my sis
Remember I am here
To hold and hug, love and cherish
And to wipe away any tear

-I love you sis...and you too sis..and sis and sis and sis..I love you all

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-13 01:19 AM

HaVoK~~~This was really sweet...I cannot tell my sister I love her cause I dont...

-I love you sis...and you too sis..and sis and sis and sis..I love you all

That made me smile and it hurt alot...(I just got my wisdom teeth pulled.)

Keep up the good work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

2 posted 2000-09-13 02:04 AM

i love it... it sounds so mealodous (sp?). u did an awesome job at this poem.

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

3 posted 2000-09-13 05:39 AM

aaaw, so sweet!!!! and yeah, the last line made me smile too... hehe, I got kinda a love-hate realtionship with my sis, but she's a lot older then me and we're the only two...so it kinda bumps a lot I guess...
but I liked it!!!

luv, Virgin Suïcide...

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

HaVoK
Junior Member

since 2000-09-06

Posts 31
DETROIT, MI

4 posted 2000-09-13 08:20 AM

Thanks all for the replys...
And I don't know I got so lucky to have 5 beautiful, loving sisters...

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-09-13 04:11 PM

I liked this too

Did you give it to your sister?

HaVoK
Junior Member

since 2000-09-06

Posts 31
DETROIT, MI

6 posted 2000-09-13 05:15 PM

She already knows.... But I probably should
Don't want my other 4 sisters to get jealous...
hehe

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