Step Right Up (Just something funny I think)

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Teen Poetry #3

Step Right Up (Just something funny I think)

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

0 posted 2000-09-12 04:41 PM

"Step right up
come take a look,
it's better than anything
ever in a book

Yes that's right
just step in here,
what's that you say?
oh, no need for fear

You're all about
to be shocked,
seeing what's inside
this box that's locked

So look here now
as I open the door,
wait, you'll see,
jaws on the floor

Here you are
amazing, yet true
inside this box
I have all of you!"

Ok, um, I just thought of this quick sitting here, I know it's not too great. Kinda fun though, right?

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-12 04:58 PM

Lakewalker~~~You may not think that it is any good, but I think it is...You have a talent and you are sharing it this way...Keep up the good work...

Hey check out my poem titled "Time"...I came up with it really quickly...Tell me whatcha think about it...OK???

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2000-09-12 08:15 PM

Lakewalker*~
this poem is so good! i love it! keep it up!
~*Pixie*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-09-13 07:40 AM

ERIN-I'm glad you liked this

Pixey-Babe03-Thanks for reading and enjoying this

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2000-09-13 08:03 AM

Hey!! I like this. It is funny, if you think about it. I don't know if you've read my three new poems, Twist (a poem about a fork for Dopey), Child of the shadows, or Never, but I would like it if you would. Thanks much. Always awaiting another poem from you, ALlysa

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-03-30 04:09 PM

Haha... yeah, the tone here was excellent! Very light. I love this piece quite a bit, great job!
~Allan

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