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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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This was written for the love of my life. My one true love. This girl means everything to me. I wrote this when we first got together. We lasted 2yrs. She left me recently and I am all alone. heart broken and torn to pieces. Left with nothing, nothing at all. No friends, no love, and no FREAKING LIFE!!!!!!!!!! Ok but yea, you'll all seep into my current poems soon enuff and see what I am going through. no pity.....none at all. I dont ask for it here with my "friends".....nor will i ask for it anywhere else. I do things on my own. So yea. ok here we go....this is sweet. Something you havent much seen. A LOVE POEM.....Ooooo Aaaaaa Just Because: Missing you for a thousand years Is just the same a day. I'm missing you right here, right now And this is just to say: I love you forever. I love you for all. I love you Natalia Till my time is called. And with this being that you're all that ever was. So I say this with my heart I love you just because. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Aha! I knew you had a love poem in there somewhere Javier!  Lovely opening lines to compliment the overall poem ... very nicely done!Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Well its good to hear that our friend Dopey here could write about love...Ohhh you wrote a love poem!!!Whats going on???I thought you didnt like the idea of love poems???LOL This was really good...Keep up the good work... Why did you and her break up after 2 years (if you dont mind that I ask)??? Ohh and sorry about the other night when we were talking...Just dont try and tell me about myself...Cuz I think I know myself a lot more then you know me...And the same with me saying things about you!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
now i am another person who usually dislikes love poems for the fact that i think they are a little sappy..the ones i read anyway..but you're has escaped that dreadful state of sappiness and it is very true to the heart..a beautiful piece. i think if i ever write a love poem i shall fill it with metaphors..wrather not be blatant. Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Erin= yes I write TONS about love and loves loss. I just don't post them up much because there are too many of those on here. Anyway, I don't mind at all you asking WHY she left me, I still won't answer it though hehe. I can't, you see.....it's too painful to even think about. So yea, anyway. Anomaly- haha your such a weirdo. Thanks for liking this simple love poem. Means a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I didn't know you wrote love poems! But I like it none the same. (A rose by another name would still smell as sweet) Don't even ask where that came from, because last time I checked I didn't quote Shakespere) Anyways, about ur reply to my poem, why don't you try writing about forks? I'm still thinking about an idea for one though. Well, I gave my two cents worth. I been through the love and heartache thing, am there right now. Only known the guy 4 two months, anyways, like the poem ( i think i'll shut up now) bye bye,. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
that was a really good poem. it had a lot of meaning and expressed a lot of emotion. excellent poem! *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think this is a great poem and keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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