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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-10 10:37 PM

Ok so here's the problem folks. It says in the little rules thing that I have to post up 3 poems a day maximum. Ok right? GREAT! So yea i posted 3 "yesterday". To be honest the actual time was around 12:30am in the morn. Meaning that its TODAY. Ok but for ME, that was my last night. Meaning today is my...uh.....today and when i posted those poems it was yesterday. So.....i am hoping nobody minds that i post up 3 more. Plus I hope the moderators dont mind. Uhhhh...if you do, just close them and i'll post them up tomarrow!!!! Thanks!

Ok anyway this is kind of a song. I don't know. I like the message.Hahahaha plus i think some of it is funny. So i dont care. here it goes!!!

Reality Destroys:

Hey girl, how cold is it over there?
There where the heart breakers rest.
Sleepless at night, sweat on my chest.
Reality destroys my dreams.
The future is there it seems.
Monkeys in the windows block my view.
Throwing a concrete shoe,
We see
What we can't be.
What is not right.
Reality destroys my dreams.
Pointing out my faults is what I mean.

Never met a man who could sing my song.
I've been here for too long.
My heart aches
My body shakes
And my mind breaks.
It's the cold from the island where the heart breakers rest.
It's reality that destroys my dreams causing my awful mess.
I'm not ready for love.
She's not ready for me.
If bird **** falls on me I won't die.
I just think "Thank God elephants don't fly!"
Thats how I get by
it seems.
Reality destroys my dreams.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

1 posted 2000-09-10 10:45 PM

lol a great poem dope..I really loved the end a lot...i seem to sometimes get reality mixed up with dreams..or maybe i wish reality was a dream.. reality might be like a sickness..it even infects the place where you can make everything better..dreams.i like the concept of an island where heart breakers rest..in sorrow perhaps.

Now night arrives with her purple legions
Retire now to your tents & to your dreams
Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth
I want to be ready. - JM

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-11 12:59 PM

LOL Dopey some of this brought a smile to my face and made me laugh...Keep up the good work!!!

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~

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