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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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He wants me... I don't want this. He needs me... I don't care to feel that. I love him like a brother, the guy I never wanted. I want to squeeze and hug him, but physical love ends there. It pains me to believe I may lose a friend, The one guy who likes me so much... I may never yearn for him like that, But I'll always need him with me. If I decide to love him, and need him like he needs me, Will it then be too late? Will my other half then be gone, out of my life for the rest of eternity? |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. I don't know if you want advice or not...I'm not the best one to give it but here goes. I know how you feel about fearing losing a good friend to deeper emotions..I don't really know what to advise you to do, your situation is a risky one. Whatever happens, I wish you the best of luck...and make your choices based on what you feel, not what he or anyone else feels. ~carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you. My guy friend is so unbelievably cool... but I think that friend thing is where we end. I love him to death, I'm just afraid of deciding too late! Jenn "You can not plan the future by the past." - Edmund Burke |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nice. Very straight forward in the style but the wording was put perfectly to state what was going on. I liked it  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow Jenn sounds like you are having a bit of problems...I dont know what to say...This is a great poem...I honestly think that friends would be good together...But I also think not cause I am with someone that was a best friend to me and Im scared that if and when we do break up theres not even gonna be a friendship there anymore...I wish you the best with the decisions you make regarding this guy...And keep up the good work...I just love the way you write without using words (as I always say) that dont rhyme... ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the poem a lot, but wouldn't be any help on the situation. So, great writing and I hope you figure it all out  |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Everybody has problems... we just tend to overlook them. Then the facade fades, and we look at reality and wanna scream. But I guess this problem isn't the end of my world. He's a strong guy and no matter what..."he will survive". Jenn "You can not plan the future by the past." - Edmund Burke |
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