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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Well, I am what I am What you want me to be So step back and you'll see The other side that is me Just a short thing that came up in my mind... love, Virgin Suïcide I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I will never be, the person that you want me to be, just open your eyes, and soon you will see. Virgin~~~This is really good...This is a part of a poem that I tried to write but just couldnt get the words out...And it was almost like what you wrote...Keep it up girl!!!  ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes, the little shorts are nice. I have a name for these kind of poems and i combine them all.....i call them Poetry Portions. but yea...... hehe ok great work bye!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eya!!! Thanks!!! and ERIN: what is it with us and our poems??? love, Virgin Suïcide... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
another great poem from you. Have u entered any poetry contests? *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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