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Living Rudely
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Living Rudely |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Yet another poem from the 3rd batch. I think some of you will see this poem and say "yep, he's a rude one alright".....i think that's funny though, but seriously folks.... i'm a nice guy. I am but a wittle wittle teddy bear. LOve meeeeee! hehe.. Living Rudely: Deep are the depths of the ocean Dark are the nights without my star Mysterious is all I have ever been And all I ask is "How far is far?" Shallow are the minds of today Lights are the form we progress Rude is the only safe way To be an overachiever in this unhealthy mess.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey dope, you know i think i am beginning to love you..heh..another great poem..i am starting to believe our poems were meant to be read by each other cause i seriously am in awe of all your work from 9th grade...myself being a 9th grader it's nice to read work that i can really learn from..thank for your reply on my post It all pours out...i've had short comments on another poem i once posted like i was weird...you're one of a kind..in my eyes..continue posting these poems..they mean alot to me. Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know what anomaly? I love your writing. I freaking adore it. I am glad you like mine too. When I posted this one up about Living rudely....cuz i mean, the title just states the whole feeling of the poem.....like i just thought of you...i thought "anomaly would like this.....can't wait to see his reply"......so yea there you go bud I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Dopey I don't think I'm ever gonna be as good a writer as you...you were this talented in 9th grade and I am no where near that talent level now! (im in 9th grade)Oh well...I'll work at it. How far is far?*sigh* tootelz. ~Carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Since this is a friendly environment, I will reply with my opinins on your work, not on you. This was an interesting poem. But like usual, I have to disagree with your negativity. I don't think that being selfish and being rude is the only way to acheive. But hey, you have your opinions and I have mine... < !signature--> If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Star- thanks for being mature. I appreciate that. Anyway, this poem was a negative poem. Very..... but, you have to look at it in a certain point of view to actually say "hey, i can see why he wrote this". It wasn't me saying live rudely and thats the whole message but oh well. Oh and hey, remember...these poems are me 3yrs ago. I don't think like this now. Oh and sorry about what i said about yer little quote thingy. it was a JOKE, i didnt think youd take things so personal. Hope you can forgive me. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
OK, here goes, as for being mature, thanks for the sarcastic comment. I could have said many a things, but probably come to regret them, so i didn't. You say what you said was a joke, well that's nice I'm glad you are capable of joking, but why must y ou do it in such a negative way? And for some reason I failed to see where you said hey Jess, btw this is just a joke. I take things personally when my optimism and my life (which are my friends) are shot at. You have to understand that. I am not trying to be a B*i*t*c*h, but I am telling you please try not to take so many shots at people and their opinions. I apologize for coming off as a mean person. I'm actually very nice, just tend to take things a little too personally... < !signature--> If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I honestly meant what i said about you being mature. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Right. my sincerest apologies are to you then. And I forgot to mention something before, I do know what you mean about the poem, I agree, I was just being stubborn!  I guess that the little b**** in me! hehe thxs for the sincerity.Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ :) If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. :) |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Right. my sincerest apologies are to you then. And I forgot to mention something before, I do know what you mean about the poem, I agree, I was just being stubborn! I guess that the little b**** in me! hehe thxs for the sincerity.Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ :) If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. :) |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey thanks for being so cool about this. I just HATE hostility. I simply despise it. I try to be as nice as possible and my little crack at adding a bit of humor to this place wasn't proper I guess. Oh well.....but I'm still gonna try and see where i can make this place a bit peppier. HUMOR is very imp! Anyway hope to see your posts soon! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
I love this poem alot. I love reading your work. Great job *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Hey Dopey  This is the first poem of yours I've read, and I REALLY loved it! and I don't doubt ur a nice guy! I really like ur style, and if this poem is any indication, I'll bet your other work is just as great! I'm gonna go read some of ur other stuff now!Thanx for posting this! Love and Hugs ~K~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~*When does something that you thought was so right slap you in the face and becom |
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