Teen Poetry #3 |
A life without you.... |
amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
A life without you I can never imagine A face like yours can never be forgotten You've been the crux of my thought for so many years Suddenly everything falling apart and tears my heart I've never thought of a time when you'll never be mine May be I never took into account what you really desired I feel sorry at times for making a mockery of our sweet friendship Sometimes I've thought we can go beyond that line Sometimes I've thought you desired it too but I was wrong Destiny exposes my lonely soul to the scavenging reality I'm unsure of life without you in it please guide my soul Its a cruel twist of fate as we grow I'll pray in next birth we're united A life without you is not a life at all ..but a living death but I'll live to dream of you everyday Sincerely A_L |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well i can really understand how you feel. i lost 2 of my closest friends in one day and it sucked to know that i no longer had my best friend to turn to when i needed something. you poem is beautifully written. ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i to have felt this as Erin knows i lost the love of my life about three years ago. her name was Melissa and she was gunned down by a rivel gang of ours in Jacksonville. and i guess thats why i love this so. thanks for posting it. i loved it as i loved and still love her. and if you wish and only if you wish i'll be posting a poem about her in a few days read it if you like. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Please do it Jeremiah ....I feel terrible at the moment..very depressed ..but i'll overcome it finally.. Thanks.. A_L |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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