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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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Playing games to hide the game I played to make you think it wasn't a game and now I'm lost in my complete confusion. Lost in a game I played as a cover for the game I played to get you to think it wasn't really just a game but it was all just a game to me. Or was it more and the game I'm playing is just a game to cover up for the the game I played to make you think it was just a game to cover insecurity. Or is it really just a game to cover for the game I played to hide the game I played to make you think it wasn't a game and now I'm lost in my complete confusion. I don't even know if this one makes sense, but I wrote it and I like it, so i thought I'd share it  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lakewalker~~~I like it too!!!And Im glad that you shared it with us!!!Keep up the good work buddy...I cant wait to see more of it...  YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I like it Lakewalker! You've got my mind spinning in all sorts of directions ... that's a good brain tease for my morning exercise ... thanks! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Lakewalker: I like this one bunches. It's twisted! Keep up the good work! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thanks for reading this, I'm glad you like it |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAA!!!! This poem is so damn creative. This was sooooooooooooooooooo good hahaha i loved it. Its so great, im tellin ya....its so damn great to see something new around here *takes as much of this new breath of fresh air as possible*......the air here gets dense with depression. I'm so happy to see this poem. made me smile, and think "damn this kid is witty"....good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thanks, I'm gald you enjoyed it  |
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evidenceslave New Member
since 2000-09-01
Posts 4forest lake, mn, usa |
this reminds me of coffee house poems back in san fran. i really liked it although i was trying to keep things straight and confused myself lol. no surpise there. hehe. "the reasonable person adapts themselves to the world. the unreasonable person tries to adapt the world to themselves. therefore all progress is made |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
evidenceslave, Welcome to Passions! I see this is your first post, I hope you enjoy it here and I'll be looking for your poems |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
Wow now thats a confusing poem! but its soo cool! and creative! good job LiL'Kay |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I seriously just laughed out loud by the end... haha... this was so creative, so funny! Sorry if it wasn't supposed to be but you took the "games" thing too far and then I realized it's what you were trying to do. Halfway through I said to myself "I'll be honest and tell him it's too redundant." And then I started to smile and laugh as I read on... So it's good, because you had such an effect on me! Very well done!  ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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