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Teen Poetry #3

Tear Drop

luvnkris
Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-06 06:30 AM

Tear Drop

One lone tear rolls slowly down my cheek
This one lone tear holds all my emotions, all my hurts
As it seeps into my mouth I can taste
I can also taste all my pain
Back into my body that pain shoots
Back into my soul
Waiting for that next tear so it can emerge again

believe it or not... this poem was selected to be published in this book called, 'Nature's Echoes' and it also was selected in the semi-finalist in this huge poetry competition!
hehe thats my brag

and i don't even think its that goood.

* reach into that heart of yours, don't ignore the dream *

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

1 posted 2000-09-06 11:57 AM

this was good
i really liked it
great work

Love Ya Bunches
~Jen~

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The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

[This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 09-06-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-06 03:01 PM

Well I dont know why you are suprised...I find the poem quite intresting...I never read a poem based on a tear drop...And you did a really good job doing it...Keep up the good work!!!

YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-09-06 03:05 PM

I really like this

! I could see the tear moving down your face, good writing. Keep it up!

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