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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Yes, the feared me is back. Sorry folks for the lack of contribution to the forum (as if u care), but i was out at a party and got back at 9:30am this morning. Anyway, I know i was missed so I have decided to post up a lovely poem of mine. Nothing: Nothing is all Nothing is near Nothing is small Nothing is fear Nothing can do Nothing can see Nothing can move Nothing can be Nothing am I Nothing is free Nothing is lie Nothing can flee We are nothing as nothing are we. We live a life as nothing can be. Nothing is filled with space and air, And nothing kills us in total despair.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
What more can I say other than, kewl. I like it, keep up the work. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
*claps loudly, jumps up and down, and does her best cheering jump for you* *LMAO* ROCK ON! I love this!! As soon as I get a chance, it is going into my collection! Keep it up bud!  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~This is good!!!  I cant wait to see more...I also want to tell you I am sorry for the way I acted when you tried to help me the other day...Its just I have been upset lately then you saying he's cheating and all that got me mad...So Sorry!!!  ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Nicely done! You are talented and your work is excellent. All I have to say for now so buh bye. Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Erin- thanks for the apology. I appreciate it...plus thanks for liking the poem and wanting to see more. Star- I so appreciate the compliments. Thanks!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Okay, you've risen to a whole new level of awesome in my mind. This is just great. I guess I'll go ahead and say it: this poem is the shi-zit! Peace, dude. *~Meredith~* (well, the system edited out my comment to 'this is the ****!, but you can gather what I was trying to say. ) [This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is really good, I must say. Disregarding the first few posts, you're really shinning through Keep em coming... Salma |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Nice poem. It speaks to me! You wouldn't happen to know why it's so freakin' cold everywhere, cause I'm freezin' and it's relly warm in my house, any idea? Poem rocks! Can't wait to read more! Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Not bad, I guess. Just kidding, even though my first impression of you was unfavorable, you're a talented writer. I was able to see somebody I know in the way you were acting... and it wasn't good. But I'm over it, and keep writing.Jenn [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes well thank you for the compliments once again, Oh and Jenn......im glad your opinion on me has changed a bit. Like I said, i'm not this monster meany poo poo head ( i would say other things, but hey....we got people who put these cute things ----> ***) So anyway....im glad you all liked it...ill post a poem up right now for your viewing pleasure. BYE! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
No problem... I may be stubborn, but I usually can say when I'm wrong. Just stop reminding me of someone... and we'll be all good. I think it was the 'adios' that tipped me over... nevermind you have no idea who I am talking about, so you can't possibly change what you are doing! C-ya. Jenn |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well you are right, I have no idea who im reminding you of. Frankly, This is me and people will have to read my little quote that i wrote. I have it there for a reason. I don't know if somebody wise or chinese made it up.....i wrote it myself. I am sure somebody else wrote something simular...but whatever. Anyway....i say adios because i am PUERTO RICAN....a real one.....one that actually lives in PUERTO RICO....im not a newyorican......asi que, yo puedo hablar en espanol cuando quiero......so ADIOS is my language....sorry if it bothers you, but oh well. Bye <----- effort I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Dopey_Dope*~ what more can i say besides you completely rock my world??? keep it up, this is going in my collection, along with a few of your others!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, i rock your world? You know, often with a lot of posts I feel as if I am being hated by many users here in this teen site, yet i always find a ray of understanding around here. Thanks for the compliment pixie....it rocked MY world I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
WOW!!! I like this soooooo much!! You are a very talented writer, and don't let anyone tell you differently... Love, Kristi "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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