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*ChrisLover*
Junior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 46
erie, colo

0 posted 2000-08-27 09:00 PM

i'm missing you,
i wish i could be by your side night and day,
i love you,
im glad you've finally said what i've wanted to say,

you told me you loved me so,
you told me that you cared for me ,
i had the same feeling for you long ago,
and they've only gotten stronger for me,

i know you really do care ,
and i want you to know i love you with all my heart,
and im sorry that i dont show that i care,
i really do i love you so much, and im glad that i finally have someone to give my heart,

i've waited a whole year for you too come around and tell me that you love me,
and you finally did,
you cant possibly know how happy you make me,
i had many chances to give my love to others that liked / loved me , but i didn't, i hid,

i only wish i could learn how to treat you better,

i love you alot, but i just cant stop,im really tring,i think im getting better.
i really honestly dont mean the thing i say or do,but i dont know how to stop,
and i know we'll get through this but i want the pain and hurting to stop,

people say we're like a married couple,
i kinda feel like one too,
people also say they've never seen a better couple, we get along great... until i screw it all up,
i really dont mean to hurt you with what i say or do!

i love alot and i really want you to understand ,that im not tring to hurt you in any possible way,
i am really sorry.......
i wish i could take all your pain and hurt away,
but i cant, the only way i can fix this is if i never repeat those things i say or do, and tell you im VERY sorry!

I LOVE YOU CHRIS!<~~ with all my heart ...every bit of it!!!!

p.s.
to all the readers..... this may seem kinda like im screwing up, bad but its nothing really and i dont want you guys to think that im like into drugs or anything... ok??its just ive said and done some things to hurt my loved one in the past and i regret it... nothing probably like you think .. ive called him bad names (messing around) right after he told me he loved me , i didnt mean anything by it.... so he' upset and won't let it go.... ok so thats what this poem is about.. dont think the worst ... thanks for the responses bye the way on my other poems!!!
love Janette

Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2000-08-27 09:05 PM

Great piece, you have a wonderful and fulfilling heart I can see. Your so simpathetic to your actions and always want to make things seem better, I think thats good in a person and I hope that everything will work out like magic. Im glad that you two are pulling through and I hope the very best for you! Email me (jeremydraul@hotmail.com) or IM me (SN= jeremydraul).

Love,
~Jeremy~

"I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering,
I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection."
~DMX~ "Prayer III"

[This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 08-27-2000).]

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-08-27 10:52 PM

Your love will be there if he truly loves you. Great write.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-08-28 10:26 AM

This tells your emotions wonderfully, I liked it. I hope everything works out great for you two!

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 2000-08-28 10:43 PM

Beautiful, heartfelt words here. Keep on talking with him, keep on telling him how you feel. I hope things work out all right in the end for you.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

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Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-08-29 02:16 AM

This is really good...I wish you the best and hope everything turns out the way that it should...Keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

6 posted 2000-09-05 05:43 PM

Netto, hey there girl. What an impressive poem! You are very talented girl. I know that things sometimes get hard in relationships, but I also know that true love over sees all. I can only tell you that I truly do hope that you get things worked out. I know that you both really care for eachother and it would be terrible to see something that you worked so hard for for so long to just fall apart. You guys will figure it out! I LOVE YOU GIRL!! Love Always ~*~Jess Girl~*~CDQ~*~

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If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.

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[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-05-2000).]

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

7 posted 2000-09-06 02:37 AM

will you marry me.....hehehe, I am sooooooooooooooooooo just kidding. You had a nice way of making the story make sence and move well. I'm glad things aren't as bad as your poem made them appear to so be. It certainly had enuff emotion. Keep up the ass kickin.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

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