Teen Poetry #3 |
The Goodnight Kiss |
Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
When I look up at the sky I sometimes just start to cry Thinking about friends and family I miss And then lightly blowing them a kiss I wonder if they can feel the wind The touch of that kiss I send Are they thinking about me And hopefully watching over me? Someday I'll be up there Then I won't have a fear to bare No more hurt, no more pain I wouldn't have to live my life in vain Until then this earth is my place And this horrible suffering I do have to face So I send them a goodnight kiss Letting them know, it's them I miss ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nikki~~~This is a beautiful poem...I really like it alot...Keep up the good work!!!I believe that anyone who we have lost are watching down on us to make sure we are safe... p.s.~~~I love your quote!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
YAY this poem was unbelievable !!! damn you really have a gift !!! this is great...really liked this...just ...the length was perfect...not too short or too long..just perfect !!! aarrghh...you're so much better than me...I'll have to write more to get as good as you are !!! and btw check your email =) byezzz Robin |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, this is awesome! It seemed to flow great and the feeling behind it was just incredible. Great job on this one, keep it up |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Bling Bling seriously, I'm speechless Keep writing...please As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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