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Teen Poetry #3

This One Tear

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-09-02 03:44 PM

This one tear
Is for you
I hope you love again
And that I do too

This one tear
Shows no happiness
It prepares us both
For the lonliness

This one tear
Flows down my cheek
It represents the love
That we both seek

This one tear
Will dry up fast
And when we meet again
This tear will only be the past

Within you I lose myself.
Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
-unkown-

Lone Insomniac
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 45

1 posted 2000-09-02 03:56 PM

YAY !!
another unbelievable beautifull poem !!
this is really fantastic !!!
I'd really like to chat with U sometime or something...this is really fantastic !!!
damn..I keep saying that !!
BUT IT IS !!
uhm...for a second serious..this is a beautifull poem that really touches my heart..just like your last one...

thanks,
Robin

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

2 posted 2000-09-02 04:00 PM

Thanks for the reply Lone. I just write whatever I'm feeling, or things I've been through.
I think we could work out some chatting. E-mail me at [email protected]. Do you have aol instant messanger?

Within you I lose myself.
Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
-unkown-

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-02 07:54 PM

This one tear
Will dry up fast
And when we meet again
This tear will only be the past

Such good work!!!This is my favorite part of the poem...Keep up the amazing work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

4 posted 2000-09-02 10:45 PM

A beautiful piece yet again! Keep it up!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~

~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

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