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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-02 02:40 PM

Ok yes yes well here is, yet, another poem by yours truly. The weird, little, freaky, hyperactive kid. Enjoy it!!!!

Happiness:

I fear that memories diminish.
I fear that my life is here,
Yet still I feel un-finished
And I have a boat to steer.

Unknown worlds lay ahead
And nothing is awaiting.
I must renounce the unthoughtful dead,
And hault the everlasting hating.

Shattered clouds float above me.
Ignorant individuals live around.
This is all we can ever be,
Yet incoherent ways are profound.

Lead my boat through water and wind
To a place engulfed with bliss.
Lead my boat as if a spin
To a place called "happiness".

Ok so that's it!!!!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Lone Insomniac
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 45

1 posted 2000-09-02 02:48 PM

hey great poem !!!
it says a lot about how I look at things...only with me, the happiness is missing..but who cares, right ?
great poem still !!!
I liked the way it was made...
thanks for sharing it !!!

greetz Robinn

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-09-02 03:19 PM

thanks..... no happiness for you eh? Well soon enuff it'll all fit into place. Best of luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-09-02 05:20 PM

Very well-put. I'm thinking I like this poem a lot. Kind of reminds me of that Lit song called 'happy'. Definately a winner. What can I say? May the blessings of this so called happiness be your's, my pet.

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2000-09-02 07:26 PM

Very nice! Sounds kinda like a song..hmm...yes I know songs are poems but anyway.... keep up the writing great poem! Stay "happy"
Bel

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-03 08:23 AM

I enjoyed this DopeyDope! Great visual imagery ... now if only we could all sail off into the sunset to the place of Happiness! Wonderful read!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-09-03 01:30 PM

Well it seems that along with my first entries came controversy, but now that you are all seeing how i truly write you are beginning to fully understand the SERIOUS me. Just call me that one kid who can piss people off and make people cry. awwwwwwww hahaha ok bye

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

7 posted 2000-09-03 06:36 PM

I'm glad your happy....enjoy it! No this was a very nice post, a change of mood!

Salma

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

8 posted 2004-12-02 02:44 PM

awesome write....keep up the good work.I am glad that you found "Happiness"

~~*aRiEsAnGeL~~*
Naomi

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