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Please Read and telll me what u think |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You can guess, but you might not be right. You can try to see, I won't put up a fight. You can tell me secrets, and I'll tell you mine. You're so good to me, you're one of a kind. You said that, I'm the one you think about. And it's so much fun, I don't bring you down./ But if every word, you say is true. Then I know, that I want to be with you. You can only see, what I let out. SO don't worry about me, and don't have any doubt.\ I want u to always remeber, one single thing that's true. No matter what goes on in my life, I will always love you. --------------------------------------------------- Gee, isn't he special? I take it you know who I'm talking bout. (Justin) And well, I am pretty sure we will get back 2gether, just in January, that's all. I don't know. I think I could wait that long, if I didn't live next door to the person who annoys him all day everyday. I think I have Justintitus. Who knows? |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! I think this was awesome! Keep up the great work  ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hey, this is a really good piece. I know that waiting for that special someone to return to you can be hard, but you just have to be strong. I hope things work out! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey allysa.....this poem told me everything about NITSUJ , and how special he is to you. Great writing.....waiting to read more of your workAs i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
DQ and Lovebug: Thanks for replying. acire: How's your life? Hope you've worked everything out with Erica. The NITSUJ situation isn't any better. But I did talk to him and if you want to know anything about it, e mail Lakewalker and tell him to forward the first message I sent you. Alrighty? Thanks for replying! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Allysa!!! It's not going well with Erica...it hasn't in the last 3 1/2 months. Specially now that she's pregnant w/ this guy's kid. She was telling me how she hated the guy cause of things that happened after, now i feel she wants to come back. But i can't let her just play me around again. I'm not gonna be ona leash anymore. Don't get me wrong, I still love her but...you know what I mean. I have this one poem i wrote before and i reposted it a month back. It's the first part of my "reposts-just wanna let girls know how guys feel". I know you'd really like that poem. look back like 30 days or less As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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