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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Lakewalker did one of these earlier I think. Just add some words that you think will help someone, Id appreciate it if it rhymes and flows with the following peice. When someone posts a follow up Ill edit this message to make it longer. When you fall apart and stumble down, Create a smile to overthrow that frown, Keep your head up in the highest air, As If your too special to give a care, When it seems that nothing works out And that love is too good to be true Be patient, and know when it's time True love will come to you And when it seems you have no control Like ashes blown to the wind Rest assured that all will work out All things turn out right in the end Push it down, and get back up! Give it back as good as you got Don’t take anything from anybody, Rise like cream to the top of the pot! Choosing to accept failure, Is the WORST thing to do! Get your pride back, come on! Victory awaits you! When it seems you have to fall And you have no hope for all Remember your dear friends And the Love that never ends As you dream of all things wrong Remember that it won't take long It may feel like the worlds worst caper But don't forget to put your words on paper When it seems like the world Has left you all alone There's no other place in the world That is better than you home People to support you A place to bleong Pick your life up off the ground And don't say that im wrong Don't struggle just to pull off what others want you to do Live your life the way you want Live your life for you [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I think that this is a great idea! Here's my contribution!  When it seems that nothing works out And that love is too good to be true Be patient, and know when it's time True love will come to you And when it seems you have no control Like ashes blown to the wind Rest assured that all will work out All things turn out right in the end I hope to see more people respond to this challenge! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Push it down, and get back up! Give it back as good as you got Dont take anything from anybody, Rise like cream to the top of the pot! Choosing to accept failure, Is the WORST thing to do! Get your pride back, come on! Victory awaits you! -"Victory needs no explaination, Defeat allows none." |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Thanks you two, great contributions! "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Great idea Jeremy..here are my contributions! When it seems you have to fall And you have no hope for all Remember your dear friends And the Love that never ends As you dream of all things wrong Remember that it won't take long It may feel like the worlds worst caper But don't forget to put your words on paper. ~*~SCG~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
When it seems like the world, has left you all alone. there's no other place in the world, that is better than you home. people to support you, a place to bleong. pick your life up off the ground, and don't say that im wrong. Don't struggle just to pull off, what others want you to do. Live your life the way you want. Live your life for you. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Great lines, creates more flow, thanks! "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Everyone has mishaps Don't think you're all alone Just as Stella got her groove back Soon you'll find the winners' zone So chin up now, be happy Let laughter dry your tears If yesterday was crappy Fill today with joy and cheer Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Understand this With meaningful concern When its someone you miss It's always your back you turn Forget all the clutter That surrouds your brain Remember it's like butter Not like pain |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great idea Jeremy ... and nice start! It was fun to wonder where you left off and other's began, by seeing it altogether at the top! Here's a few more ... So if you're feeling down And need a hand to get back up, Remember that there's many things To be so thankful of. Your friends, your family, everyone, Are there to cheer you on, So place a smile upon your face, Move forward ... and be strong! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
THINK I will add a little When the world falls apart, Use superglue or duck tape and put it back together, Remember to be kind and merciful For you too shall receive mercy, Don't leave the seat up! If so you might just get it in the end, Forget not the forgetful, For the forget! Remember to wear a smile, Before someone steals it   Remember to be yourself, Because someone else is not you. Remember my words, For I was not serious when I did this  For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
K I cant edit anymore, oh well, good poem that we all put together. "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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