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My poem for my man! :)
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My poem for my man! :) |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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You really are so special I can’t begin to say All the things you do for me In your own special way You made me feel complete again After life’s bads took its toll I had my fair share of tears and joys But none joys like I now know I can’t believe you choose me You I don’t deserve But you accepted me as your friend first No judging did you serve You trusted me with secrets That no others did you tell I kept them all locked away I trusted you as well We talked about relationships All the ups and downs We helped each other out When on our face were frowns You’ll never really know How much you helped me out All the great advice you gave How you tried to stop my pout I hoped I help you too Those few times along the way When you needed my help Just as I needed yours many a day When we both were single I was looking for a guy I wanted you so badly Just to give it a try Finally when I told you The reaction that you gave Made me feel so happy That icq chat I had to save! When u asked me why I liked you I gave a sincere response I said because you are so great And just everything else When you asked me out A great grin I could not hide I wanted to see you so quickly I just wanted to be at your side Those few days straight after Were great, none to compete But that first time we saw each other Really wasn’t so neat We hardly barely talked It wasn’t so much fun I was worried it would stay like that And we wouldn’t get much done (hehehe) But the next day at the movies It was better I must say At least I got to feel your touch It was a greater day And after that it just got better At first we were just shy But now I get to hug you more And when we kissed, oh my! When we kissed it felt just right Like it was meant to be I hope you felt the same Those feelings the same as me Those feelings which said yeah Yeah, this is the day This day today has changed my life Changed in a better way It wasn’t fast, but slow and nice Slow and tasty too I loved the way you kissed me that night For us it was a breakthrough I know each and every time we meet Its just gonna get better I count the hours until we next See and greet each other Our relationship is open And we trust each other true I dream it stays this way forever I hope you dream this too |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you like it here...I really like this poem...And I cant wait till you post more...This was really good... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a great poem. It's wonderful that you have someone that makes you feel this way. I hope to see more of you around here soon! PS-check your e-mail! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome to Passions!!! Finally, I find a happy poem. I'm glad that you are very happy. It's so obviously written. Keep writing and I'll keep reading As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions LuvnKris! This was an excellent first post ... very nice flow of both rhythm and sentiments. Nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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