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Letting You Go
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Letting You Go |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
~*Letting You Go*~ I know this will hurt I know both of us will cry This decision wasn't made easily A tear falls from my eye Don't think I didn't care You really should know I am finding it especially hard Letting you go I try to imagine us Both with someone new But all I can see Are visions of me and you As I look back On our light hearted days I wonder to myself Will this feeling ever fade away? I try to reassure myself That I am doing the right thing But all I can think of Is the pain this will bring I hope you understand I think you should know Just how hard it is... Letting You Go |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Great first post! I understand how you feel, it's meant to happen, you need to let go, but it still hurts. And it's hard to let somebody go... I understand. Jenn..... P.S. keep writing! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!  You should stand up and take a bow cause this is really good...I cant wait to read more of your work... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I know that it can be hard to let go, but if you feel that it's the right thing to do, it probably is. You just have to be strong... I hope writing this helped you feel better! PS-check your e-mail! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Welcom to Passions great first poem.Keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Damn, my first post wasn't even that good. Go check it out sometime.Anyways, keep it up and Stay tru! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes great post. Anyway i can relate to your poem cept i was on the other side of the deal. let me tell you, it hurts. Let me also tell you that I know it hurts on YOUR side....but I'd think it hurts more on the side of who's being let ago. That is, if they have the same amount of love, and if its TRUE LOVE. To even think of loosing true love, and in turn, it becoming unrequited is the worst thing imaginable to a human being. You'd have to experience it to understand, i guess. Anyway, nice! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes great post. Anyway i can relate to your poem cept i was on the other side of the deal. let me tell you, it hurts. Let me also tell you that I know it hurts on YOUR side....but I'd think it hurts more on the side of who's being let ago. That is, if they have the same amount of love, and if its TRUE LOVE. To even think of loosing true love, and in turn, it becoming unrequited is the worst thing imaginable to a human being. You'd have to experience it to understand, i guess. Anyway, nice! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Pixie-Babe!  Wonderful first post ... very nice flow! I hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey!! This was GR8!! I so relate to this. I've written poems like this before, too. I've been in this position too many times. Best of luck and keep smiling! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Awesome post!!! Decisions are hard to make when it includes someone else's feelings besides ours. But you have to go with what you feel is right. As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
wow this is amazing,its exactly how im feeling and what im going thru right now. i think i might read this poem to my b/f i think its great keep them coming Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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