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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-08-30 05:56 PM


To brighten everything up from all the sadness and heartbreak I decided to post up one of MY poems. Yes, yes.....feast your eyes upon a poem about the beauty of a kiss and how it's an extension of abstract feeling into physical expression.


A Kiss:


One kiss my dear to fill all of me
Two kiss my dear to last eternally.
I ask for nothing but a simple kiss
I ask God to grant this as my only wish.

Most think a kiss is but a simple touch
But believe me, a kiss means so much.
It's all that is and all that ever was,
A kiss is a kiss just because.

Three kiss my dear to remember you
Four kiss my dear so I believe it's true.
I ask for nothing but a simple kiss
I ask you to grant this as my only wish.

You might wonder why a kiss means a lot
And it's because I was always taught
that a kiss is a kiss in every way
And a kiss you can give on any day.

© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
MoonPrincess
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1 posted 2000-08-30 07:22 PM


Hey there, this is a Very good poem, and you know that from the sounds of things i'd give you a great big kiss if you were anywhere near me... I like this poem lots, though, and look forward to more from you....  
~MoonPrincess
P.S.~ Why the name Dopey_Dope??? Just wondering...


"Love begins with a smile,
grows with a kiss,
and ends with a tear."

Erin
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2 posted 2000-08-30 07:35 PM


Dopey~~~What can I say this is really good...Smile cause I thought I was gonna be the first to reply but someone else replied to so you shouldnt be to frustrated anymore...Well I cant wait to see more of your work...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


FlipAngel
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3 posted 2000-08-31 12:45 PM


Wonderfully written!   :Sigh : kisses can be very sweet, indeed.  Keep up the good work!

~Rachel~

~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~

Lovely_Kris
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4 posted 2000-09-01 10:37 PM


Hi I think this is a great poem and I hope to read more. Keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-09-01 10:42 PM


Yes thank you for your compliments. Well taken! Anyway, i have another poem posted up called Perspectives...Uhhhh go check that one out. The Subject title is.....At last, the REAL poem you all asked for.....or something like that.
Anyway.....thanks for the compliment. If you'd like to see anymore of my work....feel free to ask.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-09-02 02:47 PM


Well done DopeyDope ... sometimes, the best things in life are the simplest pleasures. You've expressed this very nicely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lone Insomniac
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7 posted 2000-09-02 03:15 PM


hey a great poem..and uhm...I like kissing too...uhm a lot...but I think hugging is better...so next time write a poem about hugz or something !!!
and thanks for your comment on my poem...
see yaaaaaa

greetz Robinnn

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8 posted 2000-09-02 03:18 PM


hahaha hugs? Hahaha ok ill try and keep that in mind. Maybe one day when a beautiful woman hugs me i will remember what you said and become inspired. THANKs for readin.

adios



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Deranger
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9 posted 2000-09-03 02:31 AM


‘Ello!

Dude, kissing rocks.  To bad those idiot teachers don’t allow PDA (Public displays of Affection), well, that’s communism for ya…uh, I mean capitalism…hehe, uh…
  Yeah, you can write seriously, but writing for ****s and giggles is much more fulfilling… blah blah lalablah ba,

Seeya latters,

OMG, they edited the "s" word...what is this place coming to?  Hmm, i wonder how diligent there filters are...

No!  Wait, can't been mean to Passions, likes passions, pay satan later...ahahblah ba.

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Dopey Dope
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10 posted 2000-09-03 01:28 PM


yes i can write seriously and writing about stupid stuff is very fun aswell. I am going to have to come up with more weird, lame crap. Soon enuff my friend.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Suga_Baby
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11 posted 2000-09-03 01:43 PM


VERY sweet poem!! Kisses are great and you put that into words perfectly! Keep up the good work!  
Melster
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12 posted 2000-12-16 12:57 PM


How many kisses did you want???  He he he - sorry I was just reading a few of your poems - you write well!!  This one just caught my attention for obvious reasons...  (snowfight - just to remind you!!)  Catch you later!!

Melz!!

jeremydraul
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13 posted 2000-12-16 01:10 AM


this poem was a sumptuous poem... you really nailed it here, beautiful repetition and detail... its what we all ache.

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~


jeremydraul
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14 posted 2000-12-16 01:10 AM


this poem was a sumptuous poem... you really nailed it here, beautiful repetition and detail... its what we all ache.

jeremy r

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~


~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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15 posted 2000-12-16 10:44 AM


Dopy_dope- a good poem I liked it. Peace out ~Min~  

Pixie-Babe03
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16 posted 2000-12-16 02:06 PM


Javier*~
This poem is so sweet   perfectly put.  i love it!!
~*Justine*~

sweetstuff101
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17 posted 2000-12-16 03:29 PM


That was really sweet!! Sometimes the simplest things can mean the most...well written. Great job! Keep writing!!

Luv,
   ~*~Priscilla~*~
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TrueLUV
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18 posted 2000-12-16 03:55 PM


I loved this poem it meant so much to me and all the ones I love and once loved thanks you- TRUELUV

It was rediscovery in the faith in my boyfriend :TRUEluv: THANK YOU <3 -Jennifer

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19 posted 2000-12-16 07:05 PM


Dopey- Since I don't remember reading this one the first time... I figured I'd share some words on the matter.   That'd be me... always adding my 2 cents! Anywho... kissing and hugging can be far better than all that orther... errr.... stuff.   Not that I would know or whatever.... (I don't wanna blow my innocent cover) but this poem really
stated that a kiss is so great all by itself. I agree though, that hugs are a million times better, they'll always make you feel all warm.
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Lakewalker
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20 posted 2000-12-17 11:55 AM


Hey,
great job with the poem man, it's really good

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Dopey Dope
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21 posted 2000-12-17 09:56 PM


Wow, well this one was brought up from the dust covered stacks in the attic......thanks guys.......i guess this is one of my first poems, if not the first, i posted here.....adios!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


katherine
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22 posted 2000-12-18 04:01 AM


this poem was beautiful
apsara
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23 posted 2000-12-18 04:04 AM


Its fantastic. I can't believe something so simple can mean so much. Wow.

apsara

Ina
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24 posted 2000-12-18 11:05 AM


who doesnt like kissing?(devilsih grin). But hugs r better, in my opinon i feel safer....uhh..whatever. beautiful poem
Regina

Greeneyes617
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25 posted 2000-12-18 02:10 PM


Oh this is soooooo sweet *wipes away a tear*   You did a wonderful job. Thanks for sharing this.
Dopey Dope
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26 posted 2000-12-18 08:09 PM


Forget the hugs..........if you all like hugs so much......write a damn hug poem! hehe....... this is a kiss poem......COPE!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


CocoBaci
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27 posted 2000-12-19 03:10 AM


A kiss huh.... umm ya mean something sweet kinda like a treat...


Oh...ya mean like MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAH on cheeks
From me2u cus I like this poem
It's one of my favorites by you

coco

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28 posted 2000-12-19 06:59 AM


lmao@coco hey that was pretty good there i liked the chocolate kiss it was sweet! well anyways this poem was so damn great keep writting my friend! it was kool, great, awsome and i still cant get over the kiss lol.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"


Dopey Dope
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29 posted 2000-12-21 12:05 PM


Thanks guys.......glad you liked it.  



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


TopGunLauren
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30 posted 2000-12-21 12:46 PM


  Great poem everything it says is very true and it makes a lot of sence. Keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

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