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TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2000-08-28 01:25 PM

Broken mirror on my wall,
torn up pictures to me call,
pictures of the dreams I had.
All they did was make me mad,
mad with sadness
sad with madness...
...ahh...who gives a damn!
I am who I am!
You tried to change me
now you blame me
for te broken mirror on the wall,
torn up dreams, an unanswered call.

Yeah, I am angry,
angry at me
for never being able to see
just what you did to me.
The broken mirror on my wall,
I like that mirror, bugger you all!
And the torn up pics...
yeah, I did that,
it's like you always say,
tit for tat,
kill my dreams,
I kill yours, easy as that!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-08-28 01:28 PM

Hello Tears!!!

this is really good...you expressed your feelings so good in this one...keep up the good work i cant wait to read more...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

2 posted 2000-08-28 02:02 PM

Thank you Erin. It's funny actually, when ever you want to write, you never can, but when you are just scribbling some words down, trying to calm down, you always come up with something!

Thanks again

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Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-08-28 02:24 PM

I think this is really good too, I coud feel the emotion behind it. Great poem

Lani_DarkOne
Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 152
UK

4 posted 2000-08-28 02:46 PM

When I read it over, I sense the undertone...intriguing..especially 'broken mirror'..it's excellent. I understand about writing to calm down, I can't write unless I'm all wound up..
Keep posting TearsOfPearls..(from Savage Garden or your own invention?)

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~

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