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Teen Poetry #3

Season's Cycle

Holden
Junior Member

since 1999-12-23

Posts 26
Brighton East, Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2000-08-28 05:19 AM

A leaf falls from a tree without disturbing the earth
Expecting parents mourn over their still birth
Another season's cycle has quickly ended
With lives and souls broken, left to be mended
In the Summer life flourished joy was spread around
Nothing seemed it could ever be brought down
However, as it always does, the Summer soon passed on
Leaving it just a memory, some happiness gone
Quickly came Fall with trees losing their leaves
Summer is lost and with it some of your beliefs
The weather has dropped the rais comes and goes
And yet it seems the wind constantly blows
Yet this season must go, the next has arrived
One colder, darker, and makes you want to hide
Your breath turns to ice, cold that burns like fire
Winter makes Summer your only desire
But like the rest of the seasons, Winter must end
And make new room for Summer's best friend
Spring was reborn as it always will do
Another cycles passed, another year is through.

'I once picked a daisy's petals searching for an answer. I went through 10 daisy's before getting the answer I was looking for...I love you.'

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-28 07:33 AM

Beautiful descriptive verse Holden! I enjoyed your flow from season to season and the changes brought forth ... well done! Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-28 11:14 AM

Wow, this was great! I really like it, it flowed great and, and, and I just love it

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-28 01:23 PM

Holden~~~this was good...alot different then the love poems we read about everyday...im not saying that those are bad cuz i am guilty of posting those...

keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

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