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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Answer me now tell me why it took you so long to get a clue I cared and loved you so much I gave everything up for you Answer me now tell me why it took you so long to realize Answer me now tell me why it took you so long to get back to me that night You held my heart in your hands I gave it to you with such trust I gave to my world and you gave to me what I though I was seeking Answe me now tell me why it took you so long to come back around and realize That I was the one always faithful That I was the one who was always there That I was the one who you cried to That I was the one who you came to in the middle of the night Answer me now tell me why it took you so long to come back knocking at my door WELL WE ARE OVER NO MORE TEARS IAM SAYING MY FINAL GOODBYE |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, I really like this poem, you did a great job. It uses emotion very well. [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i like this one...most of all i like "We are over no more tears i am saying my final goodbye"...it really makes me think on my past cuz thats the way i felt at one point...then i turned my life into books and the internet...and then eventually my boyfriend...keep up the good work...sorry that i went on and on... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Very powerfull poem...nicely written. I like it a lot. Keep up te good stuff. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr |
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