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It's Over |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Sitting in our chair i think back You probably dont even remember all the times we shared and all the places we've been together I should've known for the start all you would do i break my heart tear it to shreds then do it all over again I shouldn't have given in so many times i tried to pretend things were fine and we'd never end i know in my heart and i knew in my head that the feelings you were giving me were totaly mislead True love was no where to be found especialy when i waited and you never came around Its not right is it the way you always make me feel like sh*t But i just kept coming back for more when long ago i shouldve shut that door i let you in to take advantage of me but now its over , don't you see Im tired of all the heart ache and pain and the tears that flow down me like rain you keep telling em we are meant to be but its clear that you are NOT the one for me Im gonna find a man that respects me for who i am so i have to say goodbye too even tho im still in love with you The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, you've put this so well. Sometimes it's best just to realize that things aren't going to work out and end it. "i let you in to take advantage of me but now its over, don't you see Im tired of all the heart ache and pain and the tears that flow down me like rain" Thanks for sharing this with us! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I loved this poem keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jen~~~this is really good!!!  i like it alot...keep up the good work...below is my favorite part of this poem..."so i have to say goodbye too even tho im still in love with you" < !signature--> ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you all very much ruff situation still not really sure what to do thanx for the comments Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Jen*~ very strong poem, i hope everything worked out for you. nice work, keep it up  ~*Pixie*~ |
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