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Oblivion
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Sink into Oblivian Fate ties our hands Our world, nothing but illission Sink into Oblivian Fall into step, Our lives shortend by our actions Sink into Oblivian Leave behind this mortal coil Step away from this one . . . and sink into Oblivian (yes, I still live for those of you who might recognize my name) "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
This is excellent, I know what your 'on about'lol  ,I can see it in lots of perspectives.., really interesting..is oblivion death, or meditation, dreams or what? Maybe it's better left to the imagination...Great "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This got me thinking too, you've written it very well. Great job  |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
definately a piece of work that deserves attention! You have done an excellant job here! Keep it up. Oh yeah, and I do remember you!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Lani_DarkOne As I see it, "Oblivian" is more a state of mind. In said state it could Death, a deep meditation, depression, or anything that would disrupt a normal stream of thought. But I've always thought that poetry is open to each reader to interperet for themselves it's meaning. Lakewalker thanks StarPryncess17 WOO HOO someone remembers me "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desi |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
DragonFang~ I know who you are, but do you know me?? I love your poem, and i'm hoping to hear from you soon.. My little chatterbox is has finally posted a poem... ~MoonPrincess (P.S. I have one poem posted, and if you recongnize the writing, please let me know...) Love ya Sammers!! "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Kristi, why for did you change your nick?? forget your password? "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desi |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
I changed it so that i could start anew, cuz certain people who knew I posted would read all my PERSONAL thoughts... A bit of writer's block I have now, but hopefully it'll soon go... That's why you haven't seen many of my poems posted... Love you Sammers, Kristi Lynn "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I'm playing leapfrog w/ the posts tonight, lol. Hmmm... I see, otay, well that's understandable. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desi |
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