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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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~*~To Many Times~*~ To many times it did end, being no more then only friends. To many times I thought of you, wondering if you were really being true. To many times I wished to call you my past, realizing our love wasnt going to last. To many times I wanted you to say, that this was only a game you wanted to play. To many times you made me cry, cause you have fun telling me lies. To many times I walked with shame, knowing that you were the one to blame. To many times I thought you cared, only because it was rejection I feared. To many times I was blind to see, just exactly what you were doing to me. ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Erin, Well thank goodness you see what's going on! (if this is about you) I know it's hard and all but you need to realize that you deserve better. Real love...not something artificial! Well this was an excellent poem so keep up the good work! Angel Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
angel~~~when i wrote this poem i was thinking of someone from my past...someone that i did care about but played me for a fool...but i am with someone else that i have been with for awhile now...and hes just perfect...but anyway thanks for the reply!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
As always, a wonderful post Erin! Your work is excellent and your thoughts provoking! Keep it and...tell the new man he better take good care of my girl or I'll kick some major butt!!  LoL have fun girl! *~*Jess*~*~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jessica~~~you always have such sweet things to say for every poem you reply to...thank you for your reply...ill make sure to tell him what you said...  ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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ShUgArHiGh Junior Member
since 2000-08-24
Posts 24 |
That was such a great poem!! I can totally relate to it and how u were feeling at the time. I think we all go through that atleast once..but what goes around comes around!!! =o) |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
This is somehting that I've never really experienced. No one who's ever broken up with me has gotten back together with me....I really hope this isn't something that yer going through...nice portrayl, though. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
shugar~~~yeah i think we all have been there before...thanks for the reply... jeremy~~~look who it is!!!jeremy himself...LOL no this isnt something i am going through...this is nothing about me and my boyfriend...its about a past experience...thanks for the reply!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Erin, hey, I like your poem. Thank you for replying to my poems, and for trying to give me advice eveen when I didn't have the fuzzyiest idea as to what was goin' on. I've figured out (maybe it's more of a found out) more details, if you're still full of advice, reply to one of my next peoms and I'll email you. ANyhow, I like your poem. Time to face another day of Algebra, and art teachers who don't understand that I am just not a painter! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
allysa~~~thanks for the reply!!!with the advice...im only trying to help you...im not a painter either but they made me take 2 years of art...and i hated every minute of it...so thats why i used my time wisely...and did my work quickly then slept... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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