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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Lately my mind has been a blur my life has been confusing i dont know wich way to turn everything is jumbled and it's you but one thing shines thru clearer then the mountain air brighter then the morning sun and it's you You are all i see everywhere i go and everything i do you even walk with me in my dreams im in love with someone and it's you I only want to be with one person wrapped up in those powerfull arms holding me tight as no one else can do and it's you But this cannot happen there is something keeping us apart somehting holding me back somethign i can't control ..............and it's HIM The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful poem Jen..I love the way you wrote this...very clever.  This is about you isn't it? Well, situations like this are hell but you just have to think about what you really want. (listen to your heart...it whispers)  Angel< !signature--> Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you very much yes this is about me and your right its hell but my heart doesnt whisper it yells out nonsence words!!! but im trying hard to figure life out!! thanx again Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Wonderful Jen!! You are quite talented. Well your situation is hell and more! I hope you can figure things out! If you ever need to talk, just e-mail me at StarPryncess17@hotmail.com ok?! Well, best of luck my dear. and keep your head up ok? ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thanks Jessica it is hell but im sur eill get thru it and when the tiem is right ill know what i have to do........untill then i have to go thru hell tho!! hahaahah thanx again Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~ The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
this was a wonderful piece! i like the style you put this in....good luck with the situation! salma |
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ShUgArHiGh Junior Member
since 2000-08-24
Posts 24 |
I loved this poem! It was so creative =o) I loved your way of writing in this. It was overall fantastic. |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
Jen, A beautiful poem, I believe this one. My suggestion.. go back and read your poems, REALLY read them.. I think the answer is clear.. In resistance, Mellie -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful writing Jenabou ... loved the way you portrayed the twist at the end, and wish you all the best in making your decisions. Great work! Best wishes, /Kit |
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