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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Death just courted me going fifty-five in a twenty-five mile zone. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
¡¡I can't believe I miuspelled the title!! An Accident |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
It's alright Jose....i have those spelling problems on days as well  ) But very nice post.....interesting to say the least. Salma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jose~~~you know what my biggest fear of dying is???dying in a car accident...you wrote this really good...keep up the good work buddy!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Its amazing how much can be said with so few words. Great job on this one! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Salma~ thaks for reading my poem I'm glad you found it interesting. you helped to inspire it. If you can write a sonet, I thought that I might break away from my three usuall styles of writing, and try a hiaku. Erin~ don't fear death, doing so will only take from the enjoyment of our already short days here on earth. Besides, If I had to go, a car accedent is not a bad way. I've been involved in three accedents now. It's the same every time: It's all over before you even know what happened. Lakewalker~ one of the beauties of this thing called poetry is the sentiment. i just found out that this can be done with minimal word usuage. As for this hiaku form: let's all give it up for the japanese. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great Poem keep up the awome work I enjoy reading your poetry. Lauren |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well lets see since we are comparing how many accidents we have been in ill tell you mine...about 7 in the past 2 and 1/2 years...and the last one was pretty bad...and im not taking the fun out of life by thinking of that...im 18 years old and still havent got my license...cuz im to scared... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Erin~ I used to be scared to get my license too. When I was in Cuba, I was learning how to drive, and an old lady witchdoctor came up to me, predicted that I was just starting to drive, and told me I shouldn't. She said that she saw an accident in my near future, and tat she feared for my life. |
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