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The wonders of life |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Atop my roof I veiw the world A tiny spec in giant swirls Of matter, gas and planets alike Atop my roof I feel a breeze The coolness puts myself at ease I've never felt so pure, so real Atop my roof I think of all Surviving on our tiny ball Of fire, water, wind and rock Atop my roof I shed a tear In joy, because I hold so dear Life, such a special thing But at this moment I am just me A peice of this living harmony Finally I set down my pen "Here's to life" I say again < !signature--> Lucidity is the answer to all problems [This message has been edited by Lucius Cade (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Applause!!! Beautiful Lucius Cade! Makes me realize just how precious our lives really are. Very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
speechless......bravo......standing ovation As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Wounderful Poem. I hope to read more. Good job. Lovely_Kris |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Life is indeed something special...very powerful words here, I enjoyed! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is absoulutly wonderful! Amazingly writ. I ahven't seen you around here mucha dn really do hope you share more of this with us. Very inspirational piece you've got here. Salooma |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Wow, I didnt think this one would get such a reception. I havent been here for a while, but I think I am back to stay now. Had a little writers block. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
WOW! A wonderful piece indeed!It makes me glad to see that I am am here. We truly do have a beautiful home here...too bad we abuse it so.  anyways...keep up the wonderful work!! As Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Long time no see! I wonder, do you remember your brother in lunacy? At any rate, its good to see a familiar name, I haven’t been to teenie for quite some time and I was disappointed when I didn’t see any names I knew. Not to say new is bad, but I just was wondering how there lives were going, but poof! There gone… I see your talent hasn’t suffered. Good work. I think a lot of people would benefit from a higher value in life, it’s a shame they can’t all read your poem… ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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