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You and I |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I could say something, anything, but that wouldn't make it better. I could write a thousand words, but you'd never get that letter. I could do almost anything, but that's one thing I can't do. I could maybe do something, but it wouldn't help you. I could make a thousand promises, I could say a thousand things, I could do a thousand good deeds, I could dream a thousand dreams. I could walk a thousand miles, and come see you as you die. I could do a thousand things, but that will never bring back you and I. I could try to put the pieces, back where they belong. I could stay there by your side, as you sleep all night long. I could say a thousand words, but there is nothing in my head. I could say that I am sorry, but that's not waiting to be said. I could send a thousand flowers, or prehaps a simple smile. I could come to see you, I'll have to wait a while. I'll have to wait untill you know, there was no you and I. And even if you say there was, your secrets and you have died. You waited till the very end, to save your broken heart. You tried to put the pieces back, from when you ripped them apart. You said that there are many words, just waiting to be said. I don't have anything to say to you, so I am going to bed. --------------------------------------------------- First day of school and I'm feeling inspired! |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
great poem and I thought it was wounderful. Kepp up the great job and hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
allysa~~~this poem is so good...i cant wait to read more of your work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very well written, I liked it. Sorry about the school  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Excellent poem Allysa! Angel Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Well this sounds like something that came out of my journal! I really, really love it. Not what it represents, but you know what I mean! Rock and roll! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nicely written Allysa! Good luck in school ... and keep the inspiration going! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Asylla greast writing and i hope you get inspired more. Not only to write but to share em all and I'll be in here waiting to get the chance to read em.I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
great job and i hope to see you post up more.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I get inspired alot, and mostly by either you guys, or by Justin. Thanks much for replying!!! Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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