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Teen Poetry #3

Role Model

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-08-22 10:52 AM

I look up to you
You are who I want to be
Then I look back
As I walk away
You aren't so good anymore
Role model

You are a great leader
But not a great actor
A teriffic kisser
Lousy liar
Great fighter
Role model

You are who I want to be
Or do I?
Role model

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-08-22 11:07 AM

chel~~~this is a really good poem...and i like it...you did a really good job...wow i am speechless...2 thumbs up for you girl!!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-22 02:22 PM

I liked this

You are who I want to be
Or do I?
Role model

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 2000-08-23 09:08 AM

I want to thank both of you for your reponses. I wasn't too sure when I posted it how well it would be percieved. Anyway thanx again, and keep up your own great work. Well talk to you later.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2000-08-23 10:17 AM

great work...very intriguing...hope to see more

p.s. I don't think you want a liar to be a role model anyways

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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