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It's Not Just You
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It's Not Just You |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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It's Not Just You Believe me, it's not just you Many people say the same things you do People threaten, people beg But why? I can't comprehend Maybe it's just something I don't get But you people You don't stop You don't quit You'll never know just how I feel inside All those feelings and emotions I try so hard to hide You wouldn't understand it anyway But you say there’s still that chance you may But could you really hear me say Everything that has made me be this way All the things people have said That have made me cry at night lying in my bed I don't what's the big deal If I skip a meal Everyone gets all upset Like it makes a difference One day I'll be thin One day I wont have to go through this time and time again One day the insults will stop One day I will look in the mirror and smile Until that day I'll stay the same Counting the calories of every meal Hoping that in time my heart will heal I can't stand to be like this anymore Dear God please, I just want to be thin |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Dear Isabel please dont stress yourself so much..really it brings tears to my eyes..Dont worry about anyone or any comments..take care and be cheerful..please do it for me.. Sincerely A_L |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a good piece of work. but i think if this is how you feel you should love yourself however you are. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hi all! I didn't mean to sound so negative in this one, I was going to write an explination, but I didn't have time. Thanks for the concern, I really appreciate it. If you have any questions, comments, concerns, advice, anything, just tell me!! Thank you so much! Bel |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
this is a good poem, i have a feeling its in response to mine, "maybe", which is in response to yours...but i might be wrong... anyway, i like the poem, it has a negitive feeling towards yourself yet a loving feeling towards someone else, and although i dont really agree with the negitive part (you are exactily what you think you are, not what other people think) i still like the poem alot i think ill leave this topic at that because i cant really write something to match that, that pretty much says it all always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW...YOUR POEM WAS GOOD..BUT WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT? HOW CAN YOU SKIP MEALS OR COUNT CALORIES? SUCH NEGATIVE THINKING...YOU SHOULDNT THINK LIKE THAT. HONESTLY. IF PEOPLE DONT LIKE YOU CAUSE THEY THINK YOUR NOT SKINNY ENOUGH THEY ARE NOT WORTH YOUR TIME. ITS WHATS ON THE INSIDE THAT COUNTS. SO STOP COUNTING CALORIES....< !signature--> ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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