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Hypocritical Jealousy
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Hypocritical Jealousy |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I want you no longer, I proclaim, as you call to me, you scream my name. I feel the time is here, say our goodbyes, get rid of our all our lies. You leave me then and come back around, spinning me in viscious circles of pain and frowns. I wish you'd leave and yet you stay, All I want is you.... to go away! We make no sense you and I, yet you talk about her, and I nearly cry. The guy I remember being oh so close to me, is now holding another, and this other, it is she. I am confused nine times out of ten, when it's over, oh no, it's started again. Why do I get jealous, this is what needs to be? Sometimes I wish it wasn't her, but me. * tell me what you think.... am I nuts or what? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jenn, As much as it pains me to say it, sc--w this guy. He's obviously not good for you and you don't deserve to be hurt over and over again. Beautiful poem. Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I agree. The worst is only yet to come if don't just grow up...right? Thank you. Jenn |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You've done a great job of expressing your emotions here, I enjoyed the poem. I agree with Thomas on this one. Keep writing great poems! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jenn, I think that this was well written and expressed a lot of emotion. You don't deserve to be hurt, its not right. You are doing the right thing by letting him go, but you have to tell him that its really over or he is just going to keep coming back to tell you these things. You will know if it is right or not. If you want to talk about this more just email me. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
If you were considered nuts then this world would be running around with nuts just like you  This is so typical and I see it everyday it isn't even funny anymore. The poem is nicely expressed and as for the situation...my dvice is to simply cut it off and show him that you can survive without him. You need to show him that life still will continue for you and that he is not running it whenever he wants to. However it's easier said then done. I know that it hurts a lot  Try to find yourself a new man to get your mind off him, because it seems that he has found himself a new lady...but thats just what I think...be well and just stay strong "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
wounderful poem. I think you did a great job expressing your feeling. Just be strong and I have to agree jnR4eva You should find someone new and I know there is someone out there who will care for ya and will not break your heart and will not make you jealous. I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you, it helps a lot to have people read and reply to what I write... this is who I am... every side of me in each poem I write. Jenn |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I understand this completely Jenn, because I was in the same sort of situation...the best thing that ever happened to me is when we broke up. But hey, every situation is different. Wonderful, heartfelt work, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Oh im feelin ya on this one babe! I JUST did this with my last relationship. I knew we needed to breakup, and when we did i found myself still thinking about him wishing we were together and i got so mad at myself cause i was trying so hard to not like it. The only medicine in this situation is time ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the wording in this poem was truly beautiful.. i really liked this one.. great poem jenn..cya~  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Oh breaks up are hard. I imagine this is in the past now, but I ohpe you don't feel this way anymore. I loved the poem Jenn Jason |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Wow Jenn. This is one of the strongest pieces I believe you've ever written. Well apart from that one the other day about Mr X.  "All I want is you.... to go away!" Now THAT is a line not easily forgotten! You are such an intelligent writer Jenn with oodles of potential. I am glad you're still writing and sharing everything with us. ~AF~ "When I eat I feel. It is better if I don't feel, I am too afraid." - Ellen West |
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