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A Moment |
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JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
I'm kinda new in here. I used to write a lot and I'm trying to get back into it. A moment First i see your perfect face, Then my heart begins to race, Now I know I've found my place. In your arms for a moment. I wish that this would never end, This time I've spent with my bestfriend. I must go my heart will mend When I leave for a moment. You're a thief, you stole my heart. I think of you when we're apart. My life is changed you've made a mark. My heart is yours for a moment. Please don't go and leave me here, Wishing you were somewhere near. Being alone is my only fear, Stay with me for a moment. I guess there's nothing i can do; I'm hoppelessly in love with you. Tell me that you love me too, Love me for a moment. Jason S. Roethlisberger |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I really enjoyed this poem, it flowed well and tells your emotions wonderfully. I can't wait to read more of your poems! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
~*~Welcome to Passions~*~i hope that you enjoy it here as much as i do!!!good poem...looks like you just opened your mind and let everything come out!!!cant wait to see more... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Welcome !! So much can happen in a moment! I believe that I may have a few of my own poems about what can happen in a moment floating around here at Passions. This was a wonderful first post, and I hope to see many more ~*~*~Tamma~*~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
That was nice, it was very well worded and specific, sometimes moments can make something that will evolve into something bigger and better, good luck in the future to come! ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Great poem!! that was awesome, keep up the great work!Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
i loved this poem...it was really good..i hope you write more poems like this..it sounded really sweet... |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
uhhh lord love.... been in love it's beautifull but sometimes that person might not feel the same but a moment of their love, a simple moment can mean so much.....great poem...keep it up... and welocome 2 passions !@##)*(^&*+)_<><:"~^*&#@ sometimes i stand, sometimes i sit... i never know what there is to know.. i never could write a poem.. : ) |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, let me start by saying WELCOME to Passions!!!! I hope that you enjoy it here. I want to also thak you for reponding to my poem. This piece of work was very well written and thought out. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Hi!! Welcome to passions and I think you wrote a great and wounderful poem and I really enjoyed reading this poem. Keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey!  Oh that was so awesome. I really liked it. I want to read more. Mail me sometime cause I'd like to talk to you: [email protected] Great job keep it up!!~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions JR! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow. We invite you to join the family! This is a wonderful first post Jason, very nice expression! I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
welcome to passions!!! Awesome writing...very heart felt. Hope to see more of your works in the future As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Well it was an awsome poem and I used to post poems on here too tell they screwed me over.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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