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Teen Poetry #3

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Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-08-19 04:33 PM

My guy will have eyes
To see me
My guy will ears
To hear him
My guy will have arms
To hold me
My will have legs
To take me away
My guy will have words
To confort me
My guy will have lips
To kiss me
My guy will have a heart
To love me

Within you I lose myself.
Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
-unkown-

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-08-19 04:52 PM

This is awesome! Your guy will be lucky to have you, 'cause you'll probably be writing him more great poems. Thanks for sharing this with us

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-19-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-19 08:22 PM

good job nikkisweet!!!i wrote a poem a while back about something like this...check it out its called given to me...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2000-08-19 10:34 PM

Pretty, good use of repetiton!

,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

"I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering,
I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection."
~DMX~ "Prayer III"

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

4 posted 2000-08-20 11:42 PM

wounderful poem and keep up the great work. I hope things work out for you.
Lovely_Kris

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-08-21 09:56 AM

This is very good....very sweet and yet it seems you are getting over someone by writing this.
It's nicely writ, keep em coming!

Salooma

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