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Sad But True |
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Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
as i walk through my life and i glance around, happyness, love, and joy are no where to be found. the only thing i feel is saddness, anger, and rejection all around me, trying to hide it from the world, hoping no one will see. at the same time as hiding it, i want someone here, someone to talk to, to share every fear. to do that would be to let out my secret i have kept for so long now, keeping it in this long, i dont even know how. i am in an endless state of depression, leading to all my times of recession. the drugs, the beer, none of it has helped, it only added to the pains that i have felt. where now is my angel to watch me, my angel has turned its back so it cannot see. i guess i am left with no one by my side, left hopless when all my feelings collide. anger into rage, saddness into depression, those are the first two in just one session. the final one is from rejection to withdraw, what can i say, i have been going through them all. i have left my physical world so all i have is mind, but happyness in the heart, its no where to find. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
sounds like you just poured out your whole heart in this one!!!good work...im sorry that you feel this way...if you ever wanna talk you can e-mail me if you want... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree, it sounds like you put a lot into this. You've put your feelings into words so well here, and I hope if you're going through this that you realize soon that you have a lot to be happy about. Thank you for sharing  |
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JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
very cool poem kinda on the dark side but i like that i hope you keep filling pages with poems and minds with thoughts. -JR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Things can only get better, sounds like you've dealt with the worst. Great flow of emotions here, hang on and keep writing to help your situation, great piece of writing! ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
it ousnds like everything you are feeling right now is in this poem..just remeber that there is always someone there for you when you are depressed when you find that person you will have found a true friend and someone to talk to..thatis waht helped me..great poem by the way.. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Jimmy..this is a great poem..the emotions just jump out of the page at the reader..writing is the best way to express yourself when you're feeling down..vert heartfelt.. "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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