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Beyond the Gates |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Beyond the Gates Flying carelessly upon the arms of she who captures you is but a dream seen by only those who fly there too. Praying nightly, yet in vein, your tearsoaked eyes peer on. Never loosing sight of she who takes the heart beyond. Beyond those gates of who she is or where she hides her heart, lies the limit of the love you know will someday start. Beyond the gates locked by the nights of solitude's dispair, gazes the one who prays that you will find her waiting there. Jeremy D. Halstead 8-16-00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jeremy~~~you are so talented!!! i dont know why you would even think about quitting something that you are so good at...well buddy keep up the good work!!!im so glad to call you my friend...im mean look at this poetry that you write j/k...haha ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
that was a really good poem~it is deep and it sounds like it is coming straight from your heart~i hope to read more of your poetry! |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
This is one of Jer's friends and I just wanted to bump this up before it fell off becuase.......well......I like it....  Bud "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! Geez your poems are like my all-time favorites. This is soo awesome. I LOVE your work. Keep writing.. ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I almost lost between all the other poems and thank god i found it! it's breathtaking! you are truely an artist, don't ever let go of this...it's beautiful! salooma |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Jeremy ... simply beautiful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Must be the name Jeremy that acquires so much talent! Ok, Im gonna stop flattering myself. This was so awesome bro, keep it going, i cant wait til I read another piece! ,._-=-*^~Jeremy~*^-=-_., |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Hi I think this is a great poem! Keep up the great work and I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wonderful poem you've written here Jeremy, your work is very good  |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jer, Hadn't read this one until today...... Of course I think it's beautiful. A bit darker and more mystical than your usual, but an intersting forge into this area. Keep it up. Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey Jeremy, I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Never cease to amaze me my dear!! Keep it up! this one was a little different from your usual...but that's good cuz you did it wonderful and this style suits you well also! Love ya. ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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