Teen Poetry #3 |
I have nothing |
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I have nothing to offer anyone but my mind and time Because i live life within these lines. I have nothing to give except one kiss cause life with me is this.(?) I have nothing to give except my love and these poems. Because i don't wear my heart inside my body rather on my sleeve Cause these words here are how i Express me. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Well that poem just gave me a different outlook on you...in a good way though It's a really good poem. Remember though, minds and time are much better to give than any gift for your mind is the gift. Poetry is a great way to express yourself and I am glad that you have chosen to share it here. Nice job. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF BEAUTIFULLY IN YOU POEM. AND I REALLY LIKED IT. BECAUSE REALLY THATS ALL WE CAN GIVE SOMEONE...OUR MIND AND OUR TIME. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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