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Teen Poetry #3

I have nothing

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-20 01:57 AM

I have nothing to offer anyone but my mind and time
Because i live life within these lines.
I have nothing to give except one kiss cause life with me is this.(?)
I have nothing to give except my love and these poems.
Because i don't wear my heart inside my body rather on my sleeve Cause these words here are how i Express me.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2000-06-20 04:38 AM

Well that poem just gave me a different outlook on you...in a good way though

It's a really good poem. Remember though, minds and time are much better to give than any gift for your mind is the gift. Poetry is a great way to express yourself and I am glad that you have chosen to share it here.

Nice job.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-06-20 03:26 PM

YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF BEAUTIFULLY IN YOU POEM. AND I REALLY LIKED IT. BECAUSE REALLY THATS ALL WE CAN GIVE SOMEONE...OUR MIND AND OUR TIME.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-17 02:02 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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