Teen Poetry #3 |
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Always Thinking Of You (all replies are welcome!) |
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QTpieOmy Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 11Illinois |
Evey night I look up at the sky and watch the glowing moon- so still, bright, and beautiful. I only wish you were here lying next to me, to see it's beauty too. Then I realize you can still see it's beauty, even though you aren't next to me. You can see the moon wherever you may be. And I hope your thinking of me When you look up at the sky. I know I'm thinking of you. Every day; All the time... |
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This poem really struck a chord in me. I really enjoyed it. I'll be looking for more of your work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful! Welcome to Passions indeed! I look forward to seeing more! ![]() *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
AS also Welcome to passions this is a great poem can't wait to read more of your work. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Wanting to be with someone but unable to attain that goal. *sigh* the story of my life. Anyhoo, I like this poem, welcome to passions and I"ll be looking for more of your work. Love, Crystal Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions ![]() ~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi QTpieomy Its an interesting link between moon and lovers....when they're happy they look at moon and also when they are sad. I do it at time shwen I feel alone and reminesce... Sincerely A_L |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear cutiepie, an old and familiar thought for those of us that love or have loved someone far from our reach... i, myself, have written a number of poems dealing with this same connection of soul and spirit that is felt when you realize that there is more in this world to tie you to your lover than simple sight and touch... a beautiful rendition of one of my favorite concepts... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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