Umm... Can't Think Of A Title (Lakewalker's Challenge)

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Umm... Can't Think Of A Title (Lakewalker's Challenge)

Lurdburger
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 39
Carlisle, Cumbria, England

0 posted 2000-08-17 03:49 AM

Long and hard I searched for you
Through caves of dark and oceans blue
And deserts, wide and plain.

I lived for your discovery
I chased your rainbow, flowing free
Without a worry or care.

But now I've finally caught you, dear
You're not what I thought, I fear
You're not the one for me.

Struggling with my answers found
I pick my feet up off the ground
Fighting to accept the truth.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-08-17 11:32 AM

I was kind of waiting to see if anyone would use this as the end or in the middle of a poem. This definitly meets the challenge and I really love the poem

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

2 posted 2000-08-17 11:45 PM

ahhh, how creative, why didnt i think of that, good job, you prolly had the best idea yet! nice poem, keep it comin.

With Love,
,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

"But I work harder everyday, and I hope that you hear me
In my heart I mean well, but if you'll help me to

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